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Sleeper Cell by Sr., Ralph L. McNeal

This is a fictional novel of adventure, conspiracy, foreign intrigue, deal making, financial strategies and the issue du jour…terrorism.

Excerpt

BAGHDAD, IRAQ
SEPTEMBER, 2004

It was a clear night. The moon was full. Rawid Ali and his family; sons Washi and Ben, their sister Alba, and mother Samina were on their way home from the local Mosque in Baghdad. The four lane highway had normal traffic on each side, except for a convoy of six U.S. Army vehicles occupying the inside lane, delivering supplies to the green zone. On the other side of the road coming in the opposite direction came a distinctive silver car with one driver. It drew Rawid’s attention because it only had one occupant. Most cars had two or were filled with families.

“Look at that car mother,” said Rawid. “The silver one over there,” nodding toward the other side of the road. As the car approached, Rawid could see the dark, solemn expression of the passenger. He made a mental note; the driver was in his mid or late twenties, medium complexion, curly hair that was connected with sideburns and a beard, dressed in a blue and red polo shirt. It looked as though the car was too low to the ground as if it was carrying extra weight for such a small vehicle.

Rawid turned to look at the road in front momentarily then turned back to look at the silver car. As the car got closer, he could see the dark expression of the driver.The driver smiled, hollered something, and sharply turned his car inward toward the Ali’s car and the U. S.Convoy.

In an instant, there was a crushing contact. A loud explosion,catapulting of bodies out of the Ali’s car and those vehicles in front, side and in the back.
Smoke and fire consumed a stretch of the highway. As the smoke cleared, you could see bodies, and body parts strewn everywhere. Arms,legs, torsos, brains, entrails, blood, people moaning, walking dazed,screaming, and crying out for help.

Vehicles burned while men attempted to squelch the fires with extinguishers and handfuls of roadside dirt to ward off any possible explosions.
Bodies were burning with people lying dead or wounded along the road and in the gutter.

Rawid with a blank stare, likewise his wife Samina. Alba and Washi looked as though they were sleeping peacefully. None were breathing, moving or making a sound. The Ali family, Washi age ten,Alba age nine, Rawid and his wife Samina were dead. Their faces and clothing were splattered with blood. Ben age six lay beside his mother barely breathing, burned, broken right arm…but alive. An ambulance arrived. The driver, Abdul and emergency medical person, Husain, along with Doctor Sultan went through a quick triage and started moving the victims. “Another suicide bomber!” said Abdul. “Yes, tried to get the American Convoy, but instead got the civilians. Looks like real carnage. Women, men, children, families, mostly returning from evening prayers at the Mosque. It’s a shame, there is really not a point to prove, or an excuse to make, especially where there is what they call collateral damage …and lots of it. They’ve taken everything these people have and everything they are ever going to have,” explained Dr. Sultan, shaking his head to accentuate the expression.
“Look, here is a small child still breathing. Bring over the oxygen and let’s get him into the ambulance.”

They lifted Ben onto a stretcher and loaded him into the red and white vehicle along with a couple of other victims.
With sirens blaring and emergency lights flashing they drove the ambulance to the El Haggani Hospital.

Little Ben Ali woke up the next morning in the children’s ward. His arm was throbbing with pain. His head ached and his face and shoulder bandaged. His right arm was in a cast, the smell of iodine, alcohol, and ointment filled his nostrils. He heard crying, whimpering,and calls for mother. He was hungry and wanted his mother. He called out, but there was no answer. He looked around.

The ward was painted green with white trim. White beds with side gates were dispersed along the room. About ten in all, five on each side. Each bed held a bandaged patient. Adults were scurrying around. Nurses dressed in white, some with “Berkas” others wore “Abayas” or ”Hijabs” administering to the small patients.

Nurse Khadeeja Mudhir, wearing an abaya, approached Ben. “How are you little one?” she asked.
“I want my mama,” he replied.

“I know you are hungry, let me get you some food, I will be back in a few minutes.”

Nurse Khadeeja left the room. He could see her talking to a male individual dressed in green hospital clothing outside the door who seemed to be in charge. He watched while the individual explained something to nurse Mudhir and saw her shake and bow her head in horror.

As a six year old, he did not know what to make of the nurse’s reaction, nor could he comprehend what they were discussing. He only knew that he wanted his family, his arm hurt, he was hungry, his neck and shoulders stung, and the other small children in the room with blood stained bandages were making him uncomfortable and afraid.

This was his first time in a hospital and he did not know what to expect. The man Ben saw outside talking to Nurse Mudhir came into the room and walked towards little Ben.

“Son, how are you, do you hurt?” said the Doctor, he continued. ”I am Dr. Zalmay al-Jabouri, I work here at the hospital and you are my patient. Which means the nurses in this room and I will take care of you. Nurse Mudhir will be bringing your food soon. After you eat I will come back. We have a lot to talk about, ok?” Little Ben whimpered and nodded his head. The Doctor left as Nurse Mudhir arrived with a tray.

The nurse put the tray on a portable stand and started to feed little Ben. Th e gruel and bread was the fi rst little Ben had eaten in almost two days. The sweet juice tasted good washing down the gruel. The goat’s milk was refreshing along with a sweet flan-type pudding. It wasn’t like what his mother made, but he was hungry. He soon finished what was on his tray.

Nurse Mudhir complimented him on finishing the meal and got up and said; “Little one, I will leave you now. Dr. Jabouri will be in soon to talk to you.” With that, she left the room with the tray and remnants of little Ben’s meal.

Dr. Jabouri came into the room accompanied by a man, in his fifties, salt and pepper beard, mustache, dressed in a white muslin tunic shirt, sandals, and a white turban. He introduced him as Dr. Noor Omar,Head of the Baghdad Central Orphanages.

Jabouri started, “Ben, you are the last of your family. Your father,mother, brother and sister are gone. You will not see them anymore.” Tears welled up in little Ben’s eyes.

“What do you mean Doctor?”

“You remember what happened to you yesterday?” “Yes.”

“Your family was killed yesterday in the explosion; you are the only one left. We have arranged for you to be placed at one of the City’s orphanages. Th ere you will find children of your age and you can make a lot of new friends.”

L’il Ben tossed and turned all night, whimpering and sobbing in loneliness and pain. He thought of his mom and dad whom he would never see again. He thought of his brother Washi and the many times they kicked the soccer ball, and his sister Alba both of whom he will never see again. Finally, he fell into a deep sleep oblivious of his surroundings until he awoke the next morning and remembered that he was in a hospital ward.

That day a black van took Ben Ali, several other children, and dropped them off at various orphanages in the city’s Central Orphanage System.

Copyright 2008 Sr., Ralph L. McNeal. All rights reserved. No part of this publication may be reproduced, stored in a retrieval system, or transmitted in any form or by any means, electronic, mechanical, recording or otherwise, without the prior written permission of the author.

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  1. Evelyn Johnson | September 20, 2009 at 9:03 pm | Permalink

    I enjoyed reading expert from your book, I wish all blessing that you get from writing this book. I know it will be a hot book.

    Evelyn Johnson
    countrygirl

  2. Ralph L. McNeal, Sr. | February 8, 2010 at 1:46 pm | Permalink

    THIS IS A NOVEL OF ADVENTURE, CONSPIRACY, FOREIGN INTRIGUE, DEAL MAKING, ROMANCE, FINANCIAL STRATEGIES AND THE ISSUE DU JOUR…TERRORISM

    “One of the good things about sleeper cell is it’s ability to make you look over your shoulder and wonder about the person next to you. You also begin to see the potential for bad in everyone, even a small child. The story spends a lot of time talking about the short relationship between the soldier and the boy and even gives our glimpses of Ben’s “All American” life after the tragic death of his family. The frightening part is how the author can take the scenes of triumph over tragedy and pieces of normalcy and sew threads of plotting and evil into every day life.”
    T. Norwood (Virginia)

    “This is a lively and readable novel of action, and situation, the narrative moves along at a great rate, dialogue is particularly well crafted. The characters are completely believable in the parts they play, and the end result is strong and effective. The story is able to keep you in suspense through its twenty-four years of activity, with today’s situations and circumstances soothsaying into the future. The international settings and places added to the foreign intrigue, deal making and conspiracy undertaking is strengthened by the strong and realistic drawn characters of Jonathan and Ben Ali. The futuristic financings and financial strategies dovetailing into today’s environmental needs set the stage for sequels to follow.”
    M. Lowery (Ohio)

    “Every so often, a writer is able to capture the moment with a story that address current day issues, events and circumstances which all readers, both young and older, can identify. Mr. McNeal’s’ Sleeper Cell delivers a hard hitting written tapestry that brings to life in bold strokes the good, bad and ugly on an international stage with a style that reminds the reader of novels written by the likes of Nicholas Pileggi, Tom Clancy, John Grisham and Norman Mailer.”
    R. A. Harris (New Hampshire)

    “Mr. McNeal’s Sleeper Cell is intriguing and so current that I had a hard time putting it down. He uses refreshing far-reaching knowledge of the various directions his book takes. Specific references of sports activities, the internals of the corporate environment, the military, even up to the Green Zone in Baghdad, all of which added to the excitement of his book. As a woman, his descriptions of the hotel rooms and the restaurants jumped out at me – so thorough that I could visualize details of the rooms. His excellent use of familiar attractions in various U.S. cities added pleasant memories. The descriptions of international projects brought a new interest that is both promising and unnerving, while the characters were believable and exciting. In his book, Mr. McNeal appears to draw from some of his own life experiences – all in the spirit of objectivity. I am anxiously awaiting the sequel with the hint of promised intrigue. This is a winner.”

    P. Wright (North Carolina)

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