http://www.freebookexcerpts.com/2009/07/30/all-in-the-name-of-love-by-shelagh-jackson/ Free Book Excerpts showcases excerpts from fiction and non-fiction books. Wed, 07 Dec 2011 23:26:47 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 http://www.freebookexcerpts.com/2009/07/30/all-in-the-name-of-love-by-shelagh-jackson/comment-page-1/#comment-8237 Ray Clarke Thu, 06 Aug 2009 09:08:44 +0000 http://www.freebookexcerpts.com/?p=555#comment-8237 sorry, but the author uses a lot of unnecessary words to describe action. The trick with all ficti0n, in particular Romance fiction, is to keep the story moving along by short sharp realistic dialogue and simplify superficial action description down to the bone. BUILD UP THE TENSION by not telling the reader every little thing. Leave him or her to use their imagination and the story line will become much more interesting FOR THEM. sorry, but the author uses a lot of unnecessary words to describe action. The trick with all ficti0n, in particular Romance fiction, is to keep the story moving along by short sharp realistic dialogue and simplify superficial action description down to the bone. BUILD UP THE TENSION by not telling the reader every little thing. Leave him or her to use their imagination and the story line will become much more interesting FOR THEM.

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