http://www.freebookexcerpts.com/2008/03/18/halfmoon-confidential-by-edward-fotheringill/ Free Book Excerpts showcases excerpts from fiction and non-fiction books. Wed, 24 Feb 2010 17:10:26 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 http://www.freebookexcerpts.com/2008/03/18/halfmoon-confidential-by-edward-fotheringill/comment-page-1/#comment-100 chrisalor Wed, 02 Apr 2008 22:07:31 +0000 http://www.freebookexcerpts.com/2008/03/18/halfmoon-confidential-by-edward-fotheringill/#comment-100 Too many adverbs. Adjectives, too, abound. The idea might be good. Needs a rewrite. Too many adverbs. Adjectives, too, abound. The idea might be good. Needs a rewrite.

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